一封据说完美的开发信

Jenny · 发表于 2012-8-28 11:10:46

在很多外贸论坛里都说这是一份比较完美的开发信，元芳大哥，元芳大姐，元芳小弟，元芳小妹……你们怎么看呢？

Dear sir,

We understand from your information posted on www.*****.com that you are in the market for textile. We would like to take this opportunity to introduce our company and products, with the hope that we may work with Export Ideas Textile in the future.
We are a join venture specializing in the manufacture and export of textiles. We have enclosed our catalog, which introduce our company in detail an covers our main product we supply at present. You can also visit our online company introduction at www.******.com, which includes our latest product line.
Should any of these items be of interest to you, please let us know, we will happy to give you a quotation upon receipt of your detailed requirement.
We look forward to receiving your enquires soon!
Yours, sincerely

Vanterry Lee

lijinmei · 发表于 2012-8-30 11:15:48

终于知道为什么一个评论也没有了。。

蓝天 · 发表于 2012-11-10 13:34:08

我是外贸新手，为什么啊？这篇开发信写的还行呀

yulee88 · 发表于 2012-12-1 11:56:40

好官方的开发信，生硬

Jessica8702 · 发表于 2012-12-5 14:23:57

太啰嗦，太正式

kathy1206123 · 发表于 2012-12-8 15:52:32

有点啰嗦，不知老外有没有耐心看完呢？

audio · 发表于 2012-12-17 10:14:43

有点过长吧

w412241071 · 发表于 2012-12-22 21:30:45

鼓励一下，帖子非常好

903848514 · 发表于 2013-1-14 15:42:12

可以再简化一点，继续努力

Joy.lan · 发表于 2013-3-26 15:04:03

这封信太长了!