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Echo北冥瑞

Hi sir::

Glad to hear that you're on the market for LED Lighting，I would like to introduce our company and products, hope that we may build business cooperation in the future.

We-Huilai Lighting specializes in this field, with the strength of good quality 、good service and pretty competitive price. we have ceiling lamp、down light、light cup、panel light、street light、wall light、track light、flood light、bulb light、and point light source, lamp belt and T5、T8、tube are supplied as well.

Should any of these items be of interest to you, please let us know, We will be happy to give you details.

Thanks & best regards,

Emily
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