小白发帖，必属精品——开发信借鉴，征集，学习

流水不腐丶

我也来发个求助帖子吧
是这样，大部分的开发信都应该简洁，明了，不知道大伙做外贸最基本的用的开发信都是什么样子的呢？
方便的话，发出来让大家一起借鉴借鉴，共同开发，进步。
我先来发我自己的，常用的有两个，因为公司主打两款。
1.我们自己的品牌Barkley Tyre:
Dear Sir/Madam，

Good day！This is Eric Wang from Barkley Tyre, China, my pleasure to contact with you. I have got you contact at XXXX, and I am writing to further introduce our tyre business.

The Barkley Tyre is made by the Chinese top 3 tyre manufacturer -----LINGLONG tyre. Our product currently covers PCR and TBR tyre. Please refer to the attachment for the detail.

In addition, we have been in tyre trading for nearly 20 years. If you find any interest in tyre of other brand/series,you can also search our website: www.hopeway-tire.com, please don’t hesitate to contact us. With the rich experience in the industry, we shall be your most professional partner.

Your prompt reply shall be our appreciated.

Best Regards!

2.及公司销售的各种零碎牌子。
Dear sir,
Good day! Glad to know that you are on the market of tyre. I got your name card in an Exhibition. This is Eric Wang from Hopeway Holdings Limited.

We have specialized in Chinese tyre exportation for more than 20 years, for more information please check our official website www.hopeway-tire.com. I am writing to you in the hope of business cooperation.

Please find in the attachment the size and pattern list of our long-term cooperative brand DOUBLESTAR TYRE. （这里是主打产品）If you find any of your interest or enquire for OTHER BRANDS, please let me know. I should be pleased to offer you the most competitive price and all-round service.

Your kind reply shall be highly appreciated!

Thanks and Best Regards,

基本上就这样吧，希望大家都能给出修改意见，抛砖引玉，希望更多的人爆出自己的开发信，供大家借鉴学习。
快来，发起来吧。小白这厢有礼了！！！

B7in

白白发威了。。。

离岸顾问-Jenny

白白啊

流水不腐丶

离岸顾问-Jenny 发表于 2013-8-16 11:22
白白啊

干啥啊- -  表现表现 把您老的开发信亮出来

tradekey

支持新版主，希望看到更多外贸前辈出手。

流水不腐丶

tradekey 发表于 2013-8-16 11:27
支持新版主，希望看到更多外贸前辈出手。

我也是这么想的

tradekey

流水不腐丶 发表于 2013-8-16 11:29
我也是这么想的

那我就围观等高手出招吧  

jkluo27

看着好乱啊

jkluo27

Dear Manager，

Good day！This is Eric Wang from Barkley Tyre,Export 20years in  China, my pleasure to contact with you. I have got you contact at XXXX, and I am writing to further introduce our tyre business.
know you business in *** think we can take more profit to you when we cooperation.

The Barkley Tyre is made by the Chinese top 3 tyre manufacturer -----LINGLONG tyre. Our product currently covers PCR and TBR tyre. Please refer to the attachment for the detail.
Our Barkley Tyre ...
In addition, we have been in tyre trading for nearly 20 years. 去掉If you find any interest in tyre of other brand/series,
wellcome: www.hopeway-tire.com,
please don’t hesitate to contact us. With the rich experience in the industry, we shall be your most professional partner.

Your prompt reply shall be our appreciated.

Best Regards!

流水不腐丶

jkluo27 发表于 2013-8-16 11:31
看着好乱啊

所以才求大神赐教么