（转）被公司评为优秀的开发信，大家点评下
标题： Mr. XXX + 他公司的名称 点名道姓和公司，一目了然内容：
MOrning Mr. XXXXXX
This is Jack Sales Manager from a well established PRODUCT manufacturer in China. Hope I reach the right person at the right time to talk about PRODUCT cooperation and strategies for your company
I did a little bit research on your company and I’m sure you would be continuously looking at opportunities to expand your product supplying scope/services and make it as the brand to own your company reputation in the PRODUCT market and increase your market return with your constant efforts.
We can fulfill any of your business needs and maximize your business profits compared with lots of PRODUCT manufacturers as we are newly launching DDDD brand PRODUCT in international market.
Our business reference includes
20 years appointed OEM for EU USA PRODUCT manufacturers
Approvals from .......(主要客户，最好是国际同行知名企业)…
70%~80% products for international application
(for more details please contact us) 这个地方用黄色文字背景，突出公司优势
As the GM of 客户公司名称 it is your responsibility to find a sustainable and trustworthy business partner relationship and ensure a promising company future. 我的公司 is interested in cooperating with you to uncover the PRODUCT demand of 客户市场 market from now on. As you have experiences in PROCUT it would be easier to seize the opportunity to win great PRODUCT demand in 客户市场。
这里很明显的标示你的合作意图和对客户公司的了解及所联系人的职责所在，没有人会反对你强调他的职责和利益
Hope to have your excited feedback TODAY.
Thanks ards
JACK
24 hours available for you
有什么意见或者建议都可以回复下。 好帖要跟上:lol，自己来:lol:lol 值得新手学习，我会多多学习。之前写的邮件没有回复，是没有吸引力。 谢谢分享，感觉读起来很通顺，学习了
谢谢分享，读起来很不错，学习了
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